Moonglow (IK)

Post by **allmirth** » November 13th, 2016, 10:54 am

Moonglow

Exiled from the sun
We bathe in borrowed light
Seeking solace

Post by **tangerinepie** » November 13th, 2016, 10:51 pm

I really liked this piece, it was thought provoking as I thought about the borrowed light..Lovely work..Tangie..

Post by **Jim** » November 14th, 2016, 6:52 am

As the moon reflects sunlight
We reflect on our joys and sorrows.
Great word choices Mirthy

Post by **Dew** » November 14th, 2016, 7:43 am

self-imposed exile or involuntary? I thought about that as I tried to apply the idea of exile from the sun to the feeling of abandonment by God or fate or luck or joy...i suppose in some respects it would have to be both. lovely

:Dew

Post by **CarolynKleefeld** » November 14th, 2016, 9:56 pm

Thought-provoking and skillfully composed; much enjoyed.

Post by **shays1** » November 14th, 2016, 11:50 pm

Perfect timing for this piece with the super moon being the closest to us in 70 years. Perhaps borrowed as it will be a long time before we see it again. Soothing this moment surrounded by discomforting possibilities. Perfect!

Post by **tmtamish** » November 15th, 2016, 8:22 am

I love this - it could mean so much and so many things. To me it reads like the words of lovers, in the "borrowed light" of the moon, comforted and yet knowing that dawn will come...

Lovely
T.

Post by **ObsidianMule** » November 15th, 2016, 1:54 pm

What do you call the shadows cast from a supermoon? A dumb bration.

Post by **Jahaliel** » November 16th, 2016, 3:09 am

such an elegant and intriguing piece, I love the idea of this!

Post by **sparky21737** » December 2nd, 2016, 8:51 pm

Late to the party here. Loved this piece it had a sorrowful but peaceful piece. There was beauty in this piece. Well written and thanks for sharing

Sparky

Post by **cafeboy** » December 2nd, 2016, 9:14 pm

How did I miss this? We both are creatures of moonlight.
This is debussy all over again. Delightful.

Post by **oursummertrees** » December 13th, 2016, 12:58 am

Lovely mirth. I enjoyed this. Exile, purification (bathed in light), comfort. Much enjoyed.

-A.

Post by **jainrohit** » December 15th, 2016, 8:57 am

Poets have been very partial towards moon in terms of writing something on life. Your penning of the sun is a welcome move here. But again, the moon comes into the play :). The concept of borrowed light is perfect in its placement here. Poignant and sharp as always. Great !!

Post by **micky74007** » January 4th, 2017, 12:15 am

A bit melancholy but very soothing at the same time.

Post by **JASON** » February 12th, 2017, 11:56 am

trying to make the most of a less than ideal situation maybe ?
thoughtfully written - congrats on the light

Post by **The ghost** » February 23rd, 2017, 3:23 pm

Someday, a new Eden.

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