Unsaid.

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Unsaid.

Post by oursummertrees » January 12th, 2017, 9:26 am

swept up, and away
a daydream's silken whispers
illicit verses
quickened heartbeats

cheeks flush in self-reproof
still -

there is so much left



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Re: Unsaid.

Post by dwells » January 12th, 2017, 6:43 pm

Pay attention to the professor's lecture OST, you have stopped your note-taking and the quiz is tomorrow :)
We will always do it I'm afraid, and wonder...
A vibrant musing of the unfettered mind, released from inhibitions and the mundane, if only for a while - cheers! - Dan


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Re: Unsaid.

Post by candlewitch » January 18th, 2017, 12:17 pm

thank you for this breath of fresh air!!! wow!

always, Cat


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Re: Unsaid.

Post by JASON » January 19th, 2017, 7:41 am

I like the positive note this ends on and how you are not wallowing in self pity...
congrats on the light young trees :thumb:



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Re: Unsaid.

Post by oursummertrees » January 19th, 2017, 6:32 pm

Thank you for joining me in this little daydream, poets. I appreciate your kind words!

-Amanda



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Re: Unsaid.

Post by tangerinepie » January 22nd, 2017, 10:33 pm

Just a brilliant poem, that instills that little sigh of well being and zest..very much enjoyed..A memorable spotlight...Tangie..


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Re: Unsaid.

Post by oursummertrees » January 23rd, 2017, 6:14 pm

I was searching for this post in the OM earlier, what a treat to find it in the Spotlight this week!
Thank you for your generous comment, Tangie. I appreciate your reading.

-Amanda



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