Wow, terrific poem; not only were your rhyme and flow on point, but you also created a wonderful story behind such a man, detailing his downfall with the content-quality of a short story.
Amazing!
Oh Brave Man With Sword
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Re: Oh Brave Man With Sword
There is a great tragedy behind this story. We get a narrow window into the man's past, and the questions rise - who did he kill, why did he do it, what does he think of it now? Is he living his last hours in regret, or is he proud of what he did?
This poem leaves me wondering what is the story behind the brave man with the sword... Very well done.
~INFPoet
This poem leaves me wondering what is the story behind the brave man with the sword... Very well done.
~INFPoet
Home is behind, the world ahead,
And there are many paths to tread
Through shadows to the edge of night,
Until the stars are all alight...
(J.R.R. Tolkien, LOTR)
Let's Go Mets!
Keep calm and pass the puck to Zucc. LGR
And there are many paths to tread
Through shadows to the edge of night,
Until the stars are all alight...
(J.R.R. Tolkien, LOTR)
Let's Go Mets!
Keep calm and pass the puck to Zucc. LGR