Censorships

Post by **testove** » April 27th, 2012, 11:59 pm

What do I do now with my mouth ,
It’s stitched in white cotton thread?
Now that my words have been dipped
in blue bleach to clean my wicked thoughts

What way do I turn now to drop
my battered life to the ground for inspection?
Introspection limited to soft cell meals
for public consumption, frozen foods.

can I see you uncensored, undone, alone?
can I see you naked and vicious, hate on fire?
Or are you just the gray ghost silhouette
showing through the rice paper changing wall?

Post by **flux** » April 28th, 2012, 7:27 am

This is imaginatively expressed, your imagery here effectively exposes the consequences of censorship. Impressed.

Post by **commas** » April 28th, 2012, 8:05 am

Censorship is bad, but this poem is very good. I loved your take on the matter and the descriptions especially. Thanks for sharing!

Post by **songofmeadow** » April 29th, 2012, 1:32 pm

the images in the first stanza very much portrayed the topic, great poem, meadow

Post by **testove** » April 29th, 2012, 5:56 pm

Thank you for the great comments

Post by **Jovel320** » October 3rd, 2013, 7:10 pm

I like your images of the stitched mouth and the shodowy ghost shapes. Well done to reveal the problems with cenroship!!
Thanks for your share!!
Jovel

Post by **testove** » March 26th, 2018, 12:56 am

Thank you very much

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