Dreams of love
When love you've never known;
If these are foolish
Then count me as a fool;
Count me among the romantics,
The gentle souls
Burdened with sacrifice,
But hear this,
That I may count you a fool;
You, who deny the passion
God plants within every human heart;
Who rejects God's very design
For every human life;
You who walk through life alone
Though surrounded by friends,
And think there is no other way to be;
You, poor soul, have my pity,
So cynical, and bitter
With not even the hope
Of love to warm you;
So count me a fool,
At least I'm a happy one.
The Happier of Two Fools
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"The poet's heart,
When in joy or sorrow,
When Bitter or at peace,
Always tells the truth"
When in joy or sorrow,
When Bitter or at peace,
Always tells the truth"
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Re: The Happier of Two Fools
Oh I like this piece, it is not about loving someone but more about the feeling of love and being open to it. I agree with you, I would love be a fool who dreams of love then a fool who closes themselves to the chance of it. A well written piece and thanks for sharing
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Re: The Happier of Two Fools
Cynical indeed, to think someone open to love as being a fool. Love is a God-given attribute that provides for, and leads to, many great things in life. You describe the emotions well.
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Re: The Happier of Two Fools
Yes, to not experience the beauty-- or dream-- of love is sad indeed; skillfully expressed and much enjoyed.
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