Untethered Approximations

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sonofnothing
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Untethered Approximations

Post by sonofnothing » July 23rd, 2018, 9:43 pm

Spend my days pondering impossibilities
Refuting my conclusions
Twiddle and tease present time with fate
Send my notions unto the horizons
To dance on the line between heaven and earth
Space is where I send my inconsequential musings
To dance with laughter and light
My soul is lifted when I breathe
Amused by my consumings
As I let my wants go
While I conclude my conclusions are bemusings
Step in line with all the illusions in my head
Salute them for what they've said
Clarity and confusion are sacred
Lay them both out dead


~ Son Of Nothing ~

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Re: Untethered Approximations

Post by nightseas » July 24th, 2018, 8:13 am

Cool attachment between clarity and confusion. They definitely do nurture each other



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Re: Untethered Approximations

Post by Christopher11 » July 25th, 2018, 11:01 pm

For now, we appear to be stuck on this earth. It’s our middle ground, and I believe it’s more for our Good than our bad. I imagine our Souls with the ability to cut across realms, and our physical Beings not having those same privileges.
Very much enjoyed!
David


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Re: Untethered Approximations

Post by CarolynKleefeld » July 26th, 2018, 7:36 pm

Powerful wise words, insightfully composed and skillfully expressed-- much enjoyed.



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Re: Untethered Approximations

Post by Wes Corona » July 27th, 2018, 1:11 pm

Between here and there, between heaven and earth, between genius and madness, lies the place where we create these words.


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Re: Untethered Approximations

Post by rupertpupkin » May 8th, 2019, 4:33 pm

Love the title and love the way the words seem to roll in a tangible jumble. Great write. Well worth a spotlight. Loved it.


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