Beautiful light

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Beautiful light

Post by Rosella » July 16th, 2018, 3:46 am

White light shine in background
red romantic leaves
shadows when wind didn't blows-
clouds turn abstract,
feel depth
below white... of hues-
and shades
imagine abstract art...
when wind blows-
leaves rustle;
eyes closing
of calming day.



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Re: Beautiful light

Post by rupertpupkin » July 18th, 2018, 7:07 am

Hi. I think this is a wonderful poem. So calming and so peaceful and uplifting. Very nice poem. Loved it


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Re: Beautiful light

Post by CarolynKleefeld » July 19th, 2018, 1:21 am

Beautifully and creatively composed, delightful use of language and descriptive imagery-- calming and much enjoyed.



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Re: Beautiful light

Post by Rosella » July 19th, 2018, 6:04 am

Hi I'm happy to know you both enjoy reading poem.



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Re: Beautiful light

Post by dwells » July 20th, 2018, 9:51 pm

Nothing better than a soulfully, refreshing snooze underneath a leafy canopy. Stopping to smell the roses, eh Rosie? Artistically portrayed and cheers my friend! - Dan


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Re: Beautiful light

Post by Rosella » July 21st, 2018, 5:16 am

hi, yeah have to get around nature and fill of it, it keeps me calm. nice to see you here, Dwells!



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Re: Beautiful light

Post by Liquid Bear » August 1st, 2018, 8:31 am

I agree, this is indeed very soothing and relaxing. It does help me to read this kind of poem after a near-overdose of darkness and torment. Great job.

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"I cry out for magic/I feel it dancing in the light/It was cold/Lost my hold/To the shadows of the night" (Ronnie James Dio)

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Re: Beautiful light

Post by jsol » August 1st, 2018, 5:31 pm

very nice, love it.



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Re: Beautiful light

Post by khurram » August 10th, 2018, 4:42 pm

Nice piece. Evocative. We all love a beautiful light.



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Re: Beautiful light

Post by S(OU)LAR » August 11th, 2018, 10:56 pm

Yeah. Nice read. Thanks for sharing.



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Re: Beautiful light

Post by Rosella » September 15th, 2018, 9:03 am

thanks for the reviews! everybody deserves relaxing days



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Re: Beautiful light

Post by rupertpupkin » October 8th, 2018, 11:18 am

Hi. Lovely poem and most deserving of a spotlight. Love this one


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Re: Beautiful light

Post by BarryC » October 11th, 2018, 4:12 am

this superb piece deserves the spotlight-well done




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