“Passages”
Times and seasons; the passages of life
Dreams, expectations; a forward glance
Troubles, trials; God's Providential Hand
Faith forged in the fires of circumstance
Grace, goodness; the privilege of prayer
His Tender Mercies, His Amazing Love
Lavished upon His Children, one and all
Blessings in Jesus sent down from above
"Passages"
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I like the concise nature of this one, squeezing the key messages into the poem without any filler - it gives this piece a distinctive spoken quality while still engaging the reader. An excellent read, and the line "Faith forged in the fires of circumstance" really stands out to me.
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Dee~short and concise in it's message written with great conviction, making for a very enjoyable and uplifting read....Thank you for sharing...Musie
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Re: "Passages"
'Grace, goodness', 'Troubles, trials', and 'Faith forged in the fires of circumstance' resonate as recognized truths and add music for staying power. Congratulations on the TPS Spotlight.