❅ born by Winter ❅

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musie
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Re: ❅ born by Winter ❅

Post by musie » February 22nd, 2013, 3:50 pm

BVP~You have such MAD writing skill's...and it does not surprise me that even though you have not been with us long, that you have already ended up in the Spotlight....This piece completely captivate's the reader from beginning to end with with one exquisite line of imagery to another....I've been sitting here looking at the blinding snow out my window all day, trying to come up with something to write and then I come across this wonderful piece from your pen...most deserving of the spotlight..CONGRATULATIONS! Musie


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Re: ❅ born by Winter ❅

Post by everhopeful » February 22nd, 2013, 4:34 pm

Excellent use of personification throughout this poem bring a metaphoric quality to the descriptions, helping to bring the natural world to life. I like seeing poetry which makes winter seem less threatening as it's usually the subject for a lot of negativity in poetry, yet you've illustrated it with beauty and creativity.
Congratulations on the spotlight.



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