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The Night That Jesus Called.
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Re: The Night That Jesus Called.
Sorry for your loss. A very beautifully inked recollection of those last moments of your mother's life essence fading into the great unknown. Sad and your words touched my heartstrings. I believe she is in a better place because that is what we all hope for.
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Re: The Night That Jesus Called.
What a lovely poem. Wonderful rhyming, pace, structure and sentiments. Well done on a most deserving spotlight.
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Re: The Night That Jesus Called.
Vinny..so pleased to see this spotlighted.I can only imagine what a wonderful lady she was.The writing is eloquent and touching..Tangie..
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Re: The Night That Jesus Called.
A special tribute to a very special lady.....
Written straight from the heart of a saddened
son who is grateful for the graces he received
from her.
God rest her !
Mick.
Written straight from the heart of a saddened
son who is grateful for the graces he received
from her.
God rest her !
Mick.
“Life is short, live it. Love is rare, grab it. Anger is bad, dump it. Fear is awful, face it. Memories are sweet, cherish it.” – Unknown
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Re: The Night That Jesus Called.
This is one of those pieces where the end product is worth even more than the sum of all parts. Most appropriately, bearing in mind the content, this is written in a relatively understated way with a gentle touch that only accentuates the message.
A wonderful tribute and a worthy spotlight, congratulations.
A wonderful tribute and a worthy spotlight, congratulations.
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Re: The Night That Jesus Called.
Words from a beautiful heart, my mind went back to the day that my mom Jesus called, thank God for loving mothers.
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Re: The Night That Jesus Called.
Congrats on the Spotlight - this is so beautiful. I'm glad I caught this one before the day was over and it's added to the archives. Thank you for this.