Poem ( America is Our Child )

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Re: Poem ( America is Our Child )

Post by godsplat » September 18th, 2012, 5:34 am

Wow, what a brilliant rhyming scheme to such a passionate work of poetry, I truly enjoyed your writing DustinCleb123!


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Re: Poem ( America is Our Child )

Post by JingleBelle » September 18th, 2012, 11:23 pm

A statement without blaming a political party. This is excellent!


Eventually, I ventured into free verse.

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Re: Poem ( America is Our Child )

Post by Ladywildalice » June 19th, 2016, 11:12 pm

Congratulations on the Spotlight for this well deserving write that I thoroughly enjoyed. Well done.


'Where ecstasy leaves gravity and dances with wild eyes' by Ladywildalice

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Re: Poem ( America is Our Child )

Post by tangerinepie » June 22nd, 2016, 11:03 am

This was brilliantly written poetically while also conveying some disturbing facts.It flows along smoothly and is a wonderful read..Congrats on a memorable spotlight poem..Tangie..


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