Taste of watermelon (Renga)

[Rosella]

One bite, deli-
cious, watermelon
was melting on
my tongue, how sweet it is.
Love coolness

how sweet,
feel bright, lo-
ve senses
how delightful
cool taste on tongue-

Savor it.
It melts like ice
cream on moment
tongue bud taste, sweet.
Breathe in, out.

[haymanali]

Nice and delicious.

[Rosella]

@haymanali:Thank you. :)

[Mazrocon]

I adore watermelon (or really any kinda fruit), it kinda grosses me out when people put salt on it though... keep fruit in it's natural state. You make me want to eat some right now... Mmmmm....

Maybe I'm wrong, but I thought a renga poem was a collection of haiku written by several different authors?

~TIMOTHY~

[Rosella]

Yep, that's what authors do. :P But I break tradition a bit.

[Aceburg]

Last comment made me laugh rosella...This was delicious,and yes i'm going to get a watermelon now...

[Rosella]

:) Thanks Ace! Watermelon one you pick still is sweet? Sweet is nicer than salty ones. :)