Carnival of Venice

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Carnival of Venice

Post by Versus » October 27th, 2015, 7:20 am

A full moon grins over Venice.
A hungry wolf,

Hiding behind a porcelain mask,
Stalks a beauty down the stairs.

She is carefree and carried by the breeze.

As the wolf follows her,
Hers is the lightest step.

Although he unmasks himself,
She glides on turquoise water.

She is the night as dark as gondolas.


_______ V _______

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Re: Carnival of Venice

Post by candlewitch » October 27th, 2015, 11:40 am

hello,

I found this to be enchanting in imagination and creativeness!

always, Cat


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Re: Carnival of Venice

Post by JASON » October 28th, 2015, 10:34 am

enchanting for sure...
it gets better with every read through...
good work!



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Re: Carnival of Venice

Post by dwells » October 29th, 2015, 6:41 pm

Sounding like the wolf has met his match perhaps V (and welcome to TPS, if belatedly!). Should have known by that "lightest step" - party on and cheers! - Dan


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