In the Forest

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Jerryk
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Re: In the Forest

Post by Jerryk » January 23rd, 2016, 2:20 pm

Hello there;
there is something so dreary about December; only the Christmas season offers us humans a glimmer of hope, but for the forest creatures December is the onset of lean times. I like the lines where the sparrow rests upon the willow branch. Btw, as a wild bird rehabilitator I can tell you that roughly one third of the bird population dies off during those harsh winter months. A fine write, ncleroy. Much liked, :sailor:
Jerry


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Re: In the Forest

Post by CarolynKleefeld » January 23rd, 2016, 5:31 pm

Skillfully and creatively composed descriptions, with compelling imagery; much enjoyed.



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Re: In the Forest

Post by JASON » February 11th, 2016, 4:01 am

This has a musical quality to it with wonderful movement...
A fine display of writing.



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Re: In the Forest

Post by BarryC » December 1st, 2016, 5:28 am

outstanding work-deserves the spotlight



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