Sipping my coffee

Post by **collvin** » April 19th, 2016, 5:40 am

I meet her eyes through
the glass as she
exhales the smoke,

From fires lit inside,
fueled by the desire to
be loved,

Extinguished by the lack
of it

Post by **Jovel320** » April 19th, 2016, 6:25 am

I like the set of this piece and can observe what transpires. Feel the inner need of the speaker. Enjoy this type of work!!
Thanks,
Jovel

Post by **dwells** » April 23rd, 2016, 1:45 am

This does conjure up an indelible image; for the reader to dredge from memories and sigh with recognition. Cheers Coll! - Dan

Post by **rupertpupkin** » April 27th, 2016, 5:15 pm

Lovely piece. Each word seems to be so carefully chosen. Concise and captivating. Loved it.

Post by **Liquid Bear** » April 28th, 2016, 7:20 am

A simple glance can tell so much. It's short but it hits the mark with deadly precision. Good job.

Bear