Be wary of the average person
Your relatives, your coworkers, your fellow train riders
They have insidious intent
You can see it in their eyes
Trust no one.
Their mediocrity is contagious
They will never understand the virtue of creation
They seek to devour your creativity
And s----- out new brands of shoes
Trust no one
You’re better off alone
You will gain nothing from their association
But a new collection of illusions and McDonalds coupons
Don’t even bother considering you know someone whose different
Get out while you still can
Trust no one
You’re better off alone
They are cancer.
Trust No One
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Re: Trust No One
Paranoia and cancer really come through form this one to me.
sometimes it IS safer to avoid the shadows.
QA
sometimes it IS safer to avoid the shadows.
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Enjoyed both perspective and structure here, as someone who feels poetically detached, I can relate in parts, meadow
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Re: Trust No One
Some very interesting word behavior in this piece. I can understand not letting anyone steal your thunder or influence your thought's, behavior or moral's....but if I had never trusted anyone, I'm not sure how far I would have gotten in life....I do understand where your coming from though and know you are not alone....Some definite food for thought in this one....Interesting read, thanks for sharing....Musie
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Re: Trust No One
I can relate to the poem...and its a terrible place to be...isolated, alone, lonely, Ive been there...and its a living hell...Good poem...thank you...