You are one of the few masters of rhyme on TPS my friend i.e. rhyme is easy to write badly but hard to write well. Congratulations on the spotlight, I always look for and enjoy reading your work
Regards Cari
The Suicide King
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Re: The Suicide King
A fascinating poem in every way, and the metaphor with the deck of cards is unique and interesting.An enjoyable read, and congrats on the spotlight..Tangie..
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A wonderful write that was both captivating and full of detailed imagery ^^ AWESOME~
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Never knew that about him Sean. This seems to be a deeply personal and pre-ordained piece of a fait accompli', (pardon my bad French). Perhaps if something seems to good to be true... So take it easy on yourself and be of good faith, it gets worse (kidding!). Meanwhile, keep writing and hold them close - all of them you love the most - cheers, Dan!
