Edgar Allan Poe(m)

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Re: Edgar Allan Poe(m)

Post by queenjellybean » December 8th, 2013, 1:39 am

You tried and succeeded in writing this! Well done writing a poem inspired by an incredibly famous piece. However, I like how you added your own style to this. Exceptional poem, congratulations on the much-deserved spotlight!



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Re: Edgar Allan Poe(m)

Post by flux » December 8th, 2013, 8:08 am

I thought I'd commented on this, I remember reading it before. I guess the comment I thought I'd written was only a dream within a dream? Well done on the spotlight.


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Re: Edgar Allan Poe(m)

Post by jsol » December 8th, 2013, 3:47 pm

I must say that I am quite impressed with your Poe(m). You got everything just right style-wise while also writing very rich and compelling sentences. I'll come back to this one many times I'm sure.



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Re: Edgar Allan Poe(m)

Post by inflames » December 9th, 2013, 9:55 pm

This is a terrible pain which you have detailed. This is a great effort and a lovely tribute. Awesome work! Congrats on a well deserved spotlight!


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Re: Edgar Allan Poe(m)

Post by Dew » December 10th, 2013, 8:38 am

Congrats on the spotlight! Well deserved! I love to see one that I reallllllly enjoyed pop up here! Marvelous! - dew



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Re: Edgar Allan Poe(m)

Post by rupertpupkin » December 10th, 2013, 2:10 pm

Well done on a wonderful poem and congrats on the most deserving spotlight.


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Re: Edgar Allan Poe(m)

Post by AnIdeasman » December 11th, 2013, 1:00 am

thank you all = ]



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Re: Edgar Allan Poe(m)

Post by jwesley » December 12th, 2013, 5:42 pm

At the least, I'm sure Poe's grave shook with glee at this honorific of The Raven. Much enjoyed the read, my friend.

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Re: Edgar Allan Poe(m)

Post by Sasha » December 13th, 2013, 6:53 am

I read it two times now, and it totally grabbed me - I mean, the language used here is fantastic, looking at the speaker's vulnerable state, expressing this undying longing, and I thought it was like a more related to the heart and emotions reply, like said before, as if it was an aftermath to the "Raven", and the ending was just brilliant. You did a wonderful job, and you should be proud of this.
Congratulations on the Spotlight!

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Re: Edgar Allan Poe(m)

Post by search81 » April 26th, 2014, 6:49 pm

As a big fan Of Edgar Allan Poe I loved it. Thanks for writing this



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