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extremely graphic

Post by ObsidianMule » January 12th, 2015, 9:40 am

the mathematician
plotting his past relations
'ex' and 'why' axis



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Re: extremely graphic

Post by Appleofmyeye » January 12th, 2015, 2:08 pm

HAHA! Very witty. Much enjoyed.


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Re: extremely graphic

Post by Jim » January 12th, 2015, 6:46 pm

Ex to the left and why to the sky
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Post by Dew » January 13th, 2015, 6:45 am

Ditto! Exalt! Some things are so clever that we all must look at and wonder "why didn't anyone see that before now?" As a mathematician and lover of word play, this had a double place in my heart! What an idea! - dew



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Re: extremely graphic

Post by Cristina1900 » January 13th, 2015, 11:30 am

Good senryu, I enjoyed it, thanks for sharing.


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Re: extremely graphic

Post by PCShogun » January 17th, 2015, 10:50 pm

Nicely done. Enjoyed this.

I have been gone for awhile. The works in this section seem to get better and better. I will need to visit more often :-)


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Re: extremely graphic

Post by Windsend » January 18th, 2015, 6:07 pm

Fun and inventive. Enjoyable read.


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Re: extremely graphic

Post by Rainman » January 19th, 2015, 12:03 pm

Smart work!
When it comes to relationships, look for the sines....



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Re: extremely graphic

Post by ObsidianMule » January 22nd, 2015, 9:13 am

Thank you all. Humbled.



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Re: extremely graphic

Post by everhopeful » January 22nd, 2015, 12:58 pm

A really clever piece; as a confirmed fan of wordplay it's hard to resist something like this, but to be able to fit it into such a constrained form while retaining meaning and conveying both humour and potential despair makes me envious!
Congratulations on the spotlight!



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Re: extremely graphic

Post by Jim » January 24th, 2015, 3:50 pm

Good to see you here -about time


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Re: extremely graphic

Post by linlin528 » March 23rd, 2015, 4:27 pm

This is so great!!! I love this! Haha just wonderful!


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