This lonley Ocean

[godsplat]

Words become like ghosts
Secrets float in a bottle
This lonely ocean

[robema1]

Perfectly captured what goes on when or if we get out of control.

Cheers Rob!

[Jim]

Not only one of your very best but
One of THE very best I've read recently.
Strong medicine

[mangodog]

wonderful ku, gsplat! I can picture
it bobbing in a moonlit night ocean.......


Drew

[Exodor]

Loved it. So few words but it brings up so much imagery. One of the best I've read

[ObsidianMule]

How many bottles on this never ending ocean.

[entwife]

wonderful godsplat. really gives me a lonely feeling.

[Richard Beevor]

great I love this form of poetry and this one is extra special :)

[Valentine]

And as long as the secrets float in that bottle, the ocean will stay lonely. Very nice write. Valentine

[Jim]

Congrats on your well earned spotlight.
I'm glad to see haiku being noticed!
Many bows, Jim

[ramfire]

The ocean is indeed lonely and also very dangerous. Have you ever seen the South Indian Ocean. Check it out on You Tube. A good write.

[Josie]

When words are like ghosts, they are just beyond our reach or understanding. When the ocean is roaring , sometimes you can not hear the person standing beside you. Keeping your secrets locked up inside you or an ocean bottle, makes for a lonely world. In this case, a lonely ocean. Congratulations on the TPS Spotlight.