Glacial Ages

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mikecaalaska
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Glacial Ages

Post by mikecaalaska » March 12th, 2015, 4:14 pm

Glacial bone-chilling cold winds blowing down a valley,
For many eons you were not here,
Hidden under ages of an ice era,
Winter snows have covered over you,
Protecting and refreshing you,
Now, Mother Nature slowly brings you to life
And slowly to death,
Ice age to slowly erode.

Have traveled over your surface many times,
Winter you were below my skis,
Summer I climbed above you in boots with crampons,
Planting an anchor into the adjoining mountain side,
Aluminum and steel now invade the smooth carved mountain wall,
Cold and drenching rains of spring to soon come,
Followed by summer sun rays that penetrate your cover,
You still survive.

The wind stops and now you are shrouded in silence,
Here now naked, void of life and warmth,
In early morning light you are beautiful with an ice field grandeur,
Silently retreating,
Five years ago you stretched a quarter-mile more downhill,
Ten years almost one-half mile,
Still your field stretches several miles,
My hope is that my children’s children can still gaze upon you.

A spring day - I move further up your slope - am alone,
Taking my time, moving cautiously,
A jagged snow line crevassing in front of me,
Today, a sensible man, I retreat back down slope,
Crampons holding me firmly into your back,
Soon down to bottom of your now crystal blue face,
Sun reflecting off the bright ice,
A slow stream of water flows from you, a stream emerges.

Life emerges downstream from an area you created,
Boulder fields that you have placed on this landscape,
Now pockets of fine gravel - a plant emerges,
Seeds carried into the area by a wind and a soaring raven,
Further downslope trees have emerged,
An ice age has left, but Nature continues to carry on,
From a tree a forest emerges,
Alaska’s glaciers will exist and blend with Nature until you slowly disappear.


The sun is in our heart,
the moon is in our soul,
each day may change,
am just hoping to be here,for awhile,
for each sunrise and sunset.

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Re: Glacial Ages

Post by karrie » March 12th, 2015, 6:28 pm

I found myself enthralled by this. The imagery put me there. Wonderful write!



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Re: Glacial Ages

Post by Jerryk » March 13th, 2015, 7:45 am

Mike,
yours is a thought-provoking poem about nature's cycles. Especially with global warming being a fact, glaciers are rapidly retreating with foreseeable consequences for us and mammals in general. Mass extinction? Could be. Meanwhile, your write is quite visual. Enjoyed reading your poem, :smile:
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Post by Baywriter » March 13th, 2015, 8:52 am

Great images in this one. Although this poem seemed to be about something much deeper, I couldn't help but be drawn to the idea of the deep freeze of winter and how spring slowly emerges from it, the grass poking through water and ice like warmth through a glacier. And again, great job on the images. It made for a captivating poem, and I can see the work you put into it. Beautiful work.

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Post by mikecaalaska » March 15th, 2015, 1:33 am

Thank you Bay, Jerry and karrie, I spend time in the early spring and mid summer along the bases of many of the receding glaciers in south-central Alaska. Yes, a deep winter freeze protects them in any ways, yet I now walk along valleys where trees and grasses have emerged since the retreating. The ice fields are miles deep and will last long after I have gone. Winter freezing and spring thawing - a way of life. Again thanks

Mike


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Re: Glacial Ages

Post by Josie » April 19th, 2015, 10:39 pm

Details were vivid and helped to create images so that I could put myself right on the slopes near the Narrator. This was my favorite stanza:
The wind stops and now you are shrouded in silence,
Here now naked, void of life and warmth,
In early morning light you are beautiful with an ice field grandeur,
Silently retreating,
Five years ago you stretched a quarter-mile more downhill,
Ten years almost one-half mile,
Still your field stretches several miles,
My hope is that my children’s children can still gaze upon you.

Congratulations on the TPS spotlight.


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Re: Glacial Ages

Post by JASON » April 20th, 2015, 3:51 am

captivating work - a thoroughly enjoyable read.
well done.



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Re: Glacial Ages

Post by inflames » April 20th, 2015, 11:49 am

This is lovely! Congrats on your spotlight.


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Re: Glacial Ages

Post by LorettaYoung » April 20th, 2015, 8:38 pm

Enjoyed this so much; I didn't want to stop reading; the imagery is so subtly real you take the reader along with you. Congratulations, well deserved. Best Loretta



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Re: Glacial Ages

Post by everhopeful » April 21st, 2015, 12:54 pm

There's a hint of personification about this which works well, it's not overdone but is left as an element which conveys the speaker's appreciation for both the scenery and the seasonal changes which seem to both give and take life. Although to many the scene described could be intimidatingly cold, it's described with enough charm to make the freezing temperatures take a back seat to the grandeur of nature.
Congratulations on the spotlight.



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