What if Basho's frog was a blackhole

Post by **jainrohit** » July 12th, 2015, 1:10 pm

Pond of Space-time
Star gobbling black frog jumps
Ssh ! No sound heard.

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*- the ripple of a frog on surface of water is similar in shape to the ripple / wave that a Black hole splashes in space-time

Post by **Jerryk** » July 12th, 2015, 7:54 pm

Hi there,
I have to say--I enjoyed your clever take on Basho's Frog. Ever so nicely done, it made me smile from ear to ear.

Jerry

The old pond;
A frog jumps in —
The sound of the water

Post by **mangodog** » July 14th, 2015, 6:16 pm

Very clever jain! Froggie is jumped
by his own jump - Basho applauds!

Drew

Post by **lethalpen** » July 16th, 2015, 2:47 am

I toó enjoyed your modern and unique take on Basho's frog ku!

Post by **unsinkmolly** » July 19th, 2015, 9:32 am

Flexibility in futurizing a formidably famous ku. Fabulous! fondly, molly

Post by **cafeboy** » August 22nd, 2015, 6:42 am

Why do I find this so freaking hilarious? This is a science nerds take on haiku. Love it

Post by **seraph1420** » September 7th, 2015, 5:13 pm

I have to agree with the others, it was thoroughly enjoyable. More or less reminded me of Star Wars..

Congrats on the Spotlight!

Seraph

Post by **Ladywildalice** » September 7th, 2015, 8:26 pm

congrats on the Spotlight indeed. Such wit and talent all in so few words. Loved it.

Post by **falstaff** » September 7th, 2015, 8:32 pm

Perhaps that was the "straw that broke the interdimensional back", of the Big Bang that made possible all of modern poetry.Congrats-Falstaff.

Post by **BarryC** » September 10th, 2015, 12:09 pm

a flawless haiku-deserves the spotlight

Post by **Josie** » September 10th, 2015, 11:42 pm

To relate a pond with space and a black hole with a disappearing frog is indeed clever. Congratulations on TPS Spotlight.

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