Her turncoat i fear

[lightedbyu]

She has my beating heart,
and i fear her pressure;
afraid of rips.
How about another fine love;
before its sour.

[dwells]

Strike while the iron is hot, as they say LBU - cheers! - Dan

[scribble]

I love a short poem that packs a punch

[Dew]

took it as running away before being rejected...but I could also have taken it to mean a romp just incase the end is near. I'm for the second one! I almost tried that reasoning to get lucky this very morning...but had to stop myself from resorting to manipulation. heh

:Dew

[rupertpupkin]

Lovely write. Well done on your most deserving spotlight

[Josie]

Narrator may be fearful, but I notice he has not left yet. He is lingering with hope. This poem was short to give Narrator opportunity to pursue the possibility of romance, that this time might be different.