In Glory

Post by **tmtamish** » November 2nd, 2016, 4:17 am

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Filtering through the frosted lattice
Dawn’s first touch
Alights upon your cheek
And is fulfilled.

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Post by **allmirth** » November 3rd, 2016, 11:21 pm

Glorious little gem here. That last line is irresistible!

Thanks so much for sharing.
Myrthe

Post by **D.Lawrence** » November 5th, 2016, 9:34 am

So sensual and entirely what it needs to be. This is a feeling so well communicated I find it hard to believe there are people that can't identify with it.

Adore.
-Declan x

Post by **created2write** » November 5th, 2016, 2:09 pm

Poet The intent to render sweet and tender is fulfilled in this write. V

Post by **tangerinepie** » November 14th, 2016, 10:21 am

I was charmed by this poem, very tender and well written..The sentiment was dreamy and the fulfillment grand...Much enjoyed..Tangie..

Post by **Versus** » November 16th, 2016, 11:15 am

If your poem transforms into something else it'll become a diamond. Thanks for the read.

Post by **tmtamish** » November 29th, 2016, 8:34 am

Thank you all for your kindnesses and lovely words. They are much appreciated.

T.

Post by **Liquid Bear** » November 29th, 2016, 10:19 am

Very visual, few lines packed with meaning and tenderness. Great!

Bear

Post by **oursummertrees** » December 4th, 2016, 10:51 am

Congratulations on a spotlight well-deserved. Beautifully written, poet.

-A.

Post by **tmtamish** » December 4th, 2016, 11:34 am

Wow! What an honor! Thank you!

And thanks for all of your kind words!

T.

Post by **tangerinepie** » December 4th, 2016, 12:03 pm

Hi..Well, how very odd we should make our way here at the same time..LOL..Congrats for this spotlight, and for your many awe inspiring contributions of late..We all look forward to seeing more...Tangie..

Post by **shays1** » December 4th, 2016, 6:10 pm

Couldn't agree more with tangie's comment. Always a treat to read your work tmtamish, and your comments. Look forward to more of these spotlights.

Post by **allmirth** » December 7th, 2016, 10:52 am

I fall more in love with every read. So lovely. Congratulations on a well deserved Spotlight.

Thanks again for sharing this.
Myrthe

Post by **SirFleshwound** » December 8th, 2016, 8:58 am

A delicate piece using subtle phrasing to form a evocative feel. Less is most certainly more here. Congratulations.

Post by **lovelornpaper** » February 17th, 2017, 10:39 pm

I love the idea that the entire point of the sunlight was to reach the slumberer's cheek - and once this is accomplished, the golden dawn light can settle in to rest, having achieved its purpose.
A beautiful and economical use of words. I've missed reading you.
- lovelorn

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