Blooms

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JASON
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Re: Blooms

Post by JASON » December 30th, 2016, 2:14 am

stanza 3 is interesting to me - it is opposite to the norm (the usual vibrance
associated with flowers) - and gives an earthy, more realistic picture of the blooms...
creative work - well done!! welcome to tps :thumb:



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Re: Blooms

Post by dwells » December 31st, 2016, 1:54 pm

A very poetic take on a classical painting unless I miss my guess Dub; although your words speak a thousand pictures :)
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Re: Blooms

Post by SongUnsung » January 2nd, 2017, 11:50 pm

Loved the imagery. Very interesting way to write about blooms. Great read. Welcome to tps.


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Re: Blooms

Post by CarolynKleefeld » January 18th, 2017, 7:47 pm

Beautiful imagery skillfully expressed; wonderful use of language and much enjoyed.



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