wane

Post by **The ghost** » April 20th, 2017, 6:09 pm

old moons feel no pain

with gravity

life is measured

Post by **ObsidianMule** » April 21st, 2017, 12:00 am

Do i measure up?

Post by **The ghost** » April 21st, 2017, 9:38 am

I've been reading the back pages.
I have some favorites.
You are one of them.
How about something new?

Post by **The ghost** » May 14th, 2017, 1:27 pm

Thanks, Cry Havoc
Much appreciated.
A slight change in the second line
Francis

Post by **jainrohit** » July 31st, 2017, 10:33 am

A great ode to the unseen aspect of life. This Haiku is really wonderful. Says a lot of things in just a few lines. Great.

Post by **interyeti** » August 8th, 2017, 6:23 pm

I loved how the second line interacts with the meaning of both the others---structurally delightful.

Post by **SilentTears** » September 26th, 2017, 7:12 pm

Simple, thought provoking and clever.

Post by **hidekazu inoue** » September 27th, 2017, 12:16 pm

The essence of life is expressed. A wonderful work.