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Christmas Gift

Post by Farkas » December 9th, 2017, 4:04 pm

Christmas gift


All day the wind blew large white flakes
The blizzard blanketed the maples and the hedgerow
Snow devils swirled over the frozen lakes
They danced to the blustery whim of an arctic flow

Deep drifts piled up along our fence line
The county road glistened with an icy sheen
A broke-down truck was abandoned by the stop sign
The old Ford was half buried by the snow-blower machine

I could barely make out the streetlamps glow
The single bulb was no match for the dense wintry mix
I’ll never forget that blustery night many years ago
Santa came early that year with his bag of tricks

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Our house was filled with a festive atmosphere
A freshly cut evergreen glistened in its decked out splendor
Father stole a measure from mother’s liquid cheer
The brandy was reserved for her shiny eggnog blender

Tantalizing aromas wafted from the kitchen
The smell of roasting turkey filled every room and hallway
Grandma made up the table with our finest linen
My sister banged out, O Holy Night, on the old Steinway

Grandpa reclined in his rocker by the hearth
In his well-worn pipe, he used an aromatic blend
Gramps stoically listened to what passed for high art
There was no escaping Mary’s unrelenting hand

***
Above our polished mantle hung a large photo
The frame was adorned with an intricate golden border
The picture was of my big brother Joe
He was dressed in the dashing uniform of a soldier

***
We bowed our heads; father asked for God’s grace
Mother seamed a bit unsteady on her feet
She was keenly aware of the empty place
At the right hand of father, Joe used to take his seat


***

There was a desperate battle on a distant shore
The papers were filled with the names of the casualties
Official telegrams arrived by the score
We knew many of the grief-stricken families

Mom haven’t heard from Joe in quite a spell
His unit was in the thick of the fray
The fighting was hand-to-hand in a frozen hell
Father said; The Good Lord will help Joe find his way

***
I tossed and turned in my upstairs nook
Our farm slumbered under a blanket of white
I reached for my favorite picture book
The pages were filled with the deeds of a valiant knight

I imagined the knight to be my big brother Joe
He wielded Excalibur and wore Arthur's polished armor
He vanquished the wicked with a mighty blow
The clashing of broadsword sounded like thunder

***
I was still awake about quarter after four
The city snowplow came by on its regular route
There was a commotion outside the front door
Someone was on the porch shuffling about

There was a rattling of keys and hinges creaking
A familiar voice sounded a muffled alarm
I thought I heard mother weeping
Our visitor brought late tidings to our farm

I snuck downstairs and hid behind the banister
Through the open door a gust blew in a dusting of snow
I instantly recognized the crutch bound visitor
Mother was hugging my big brother Joe


© Mike F. Gombas Sr.
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Re: Christmas Gift

Post by Jerryk » December 10th, 2017, 5:48 pm

Hi Farkas
I enjoyed reading your poem that held a special surprise toward the end: the safe return of an absent brother. Even crutch-bound, Joe was a lucky fellow. A very touching, wonderful write, to say the least. Much liked. Jerryk.


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Re: Christmas Gift

Post by Farkas » December 11th, 2017, 7:48 am

:bigsmile: Hi jerryk

Thank you for your visit and comments. I sometimes call this write as my "Hallmark moment." :bigsmile:

Marry Christmas and a Happy New Year.

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Re: Christmas Gift

Post by godsplat » January 4th, 2018, 12:24 am

That made me tear up, I love a happy ending and my gosh did you ever do an amazing job of putting images in my head, I felt as though I was there!!!


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Re: Christmas Gift

Post by Farkas » January 6th, 2018, 4:17 pm

Hi godsplat

Thank you for the review. I was in a Christmas way a few years ago and set out to write this story. All of it is fiction but I think nothing is relay fiction. When we write, we rely on our experiences in life. :smile:

By the way. I have been looking in on this site now and again and I noticed a meager patronage of the site. What happened?

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Re: Christmas Gift

Post by godsplat » January 8th, 2018, 9:57 am

Hi Farkas, I’m not 100% sure why things have been slow here, it could have something to do with the time of year, hopefully it picks up again sooner or later, I do enjoy The Poets Sanctuary!

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Re: Christmas Gift

Post by rupertpupkin » December 9th, 2020, 8:14 am

Enjoyed this so much on another board. Well done on a well earned spotlight. Loved it


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