Change of Season

[jaievieenrose]

Somewhere the summertime is smiling
while leaves are drifting to rest
It's the feathering of fall
to which the seasons glance in jest.

The clover fields are dancing
as night embitters with frost
Crickets singing out of time
The glow of day is lost.

The moon arose to assuage the night
as daylight scurried away.
The sun, laughing as he hid past the hillside
to set beyond the bay.

[nightseas]

Awesome reflection on nature and the seasons!

[moe]

Gorgeous description of a fall day , my favorite season by the way!

[dwells]

The penultimate line needs a touch up to avoid tripping the reader as it's read, I believe Jaie; but it might be just me too. An overall enchanting outtake on a phenomenon that never grows old, though we do, sadly. Well done and cheers! - Dan
Perhaps: "The sun hid; laughing, behind the hill" or similar...

[rupertpupkin]

Lovely poem. Well done on the spotlight

[The ghost]

Nature does what it does without a thought and all we can do is think about it.
Great wordplay hear well done

[soldierpoet]

Beautiful poem, I love the way you pulled this together! Congrats on the spotlight!