Come Back From The Dead

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khurram
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Come Back From The Dead

Post by khurram » August 3rd, 2020, 5:55 pm

Please come back
And sit with us,
In the backyards,
With sun and bees
And glasses of juice.

What keeps you away,
A simple virus
Cooked up by the devils?
Here you will find
Eager selves raising their glasses.

You can come through clouds
Back again to these parts
Where the inclination is to
Paint a world with whims.
Still we remain the same.

Do return, won’t you?
The lore will tell you some did
To find glory in rebirth.
We shall sit at safe distances
You shall relive your gaiety.



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Re: Come Back From The Dead

Post by Gavin.Marconi » August 8th, 2020, 2:46 am

I am certain the effects of covid have been felt as thoroughly in the otherworld as in the living one. I raise a glass to this write, and to a future without covid in it. Intriguing piece.

Gavin



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Re: Come Back From The Dead

Post by khurram » August 29th, 2020, 12:53 pm

Thanks Gavin. Your great message has for me the right code.



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Re: Come Back From The Dead

Post by rupertpupkin » September 5th, 2020, 3:39 am

Wonderful write full of many great lines. Tragic and heart wrenching. Loved it


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Re: Come Back From The Dead

Post by Wes Corona » September 9th, 2020, 10:18 am

With every loss of a loved one, we wish to have one more visit with those departed. Good feeling in this piece.


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Re: Come Back From The Dead

Post by jwesley » April 28th, 2021, 10:36 pm

Ah . . . don't we all so wish, my friend. And this piece so wonderfully stated that wish for us all.
Peace find you . . .

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Re: Come Back From The Dead

Post by rupertpupkin » August 17th, 2021, 3:31 am

I remember this one fondly. Great write and a well deserved spotlight. Well done!


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Re: Come Back From The Dead

Post by eploscik » September 30th, 2021, 10:46 pm

I enjoyed the write...Eventually we will be back at a place where we can connect again without reservation or hesitation. Thank you



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Re: Come Back From The Dead

Post by AgentofChaos » December 15th, 2021, 12:34 pm

drawn to the sentiment but fearful that more zombies will result at the end of this than the (re)awakened!?


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