A tree once grew right through my house,
A great thing it was in the middle there,
Through my room it shot straight up,
Its bare branches hanging low.
It was a wide-girthed creature,
Too big for my little arms to hug,
Though I loved it dearly where it stood,
Filling my large, wond’ring eyes.
Beneath this tree I placed my bed,
Its presence a calm and safe one,
Quite suitable for sleeping under
If you're little and alone.
Upon its lower branches I hung faerie lights
To give it another air of magic,
And I felt like magic too,
In my large room under this large tree,
I felt like a faerie myself.
A Tree Once Grew Right Through My House
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Re: A Tree Once Grew Right Through My House
This had 'Roald Dahl' written all over it... well done!!
You create a sense of wonderment with your words...
You create a sense of wonderment with your words...
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Thank you, Jason! Now that you mention it, it does feel very Roald Dahl, it's now making me think of when I was small and read Danny The Champion of the World. Much wonder there. Thank you, again!
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Re: A Tree Once Grew Right Through My House
A.Siegelster:
This was excellent! I could totally relate to it. I also lived in a house when I was young, with an Oak tree right through the middle of it. Great poem!
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This was excellent! I could totally relate to it. I also lived in a house when I was young, with an Oak tree right through the middle of it. Great poem!
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Re: A Tree Once Grew Right Through My House
great imagination, it would be cool to have a tree growing right through my house but perhaps not wise (my cat would LOVE it). enjoyed the read, take care.
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Re: A Tree Once Grew Right Through My House
This is such a wonderful write. Gentle and simple and very clever. Loved it.
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Re: A Tree Once Grew Right Through My House
Loved the fanciful imagery and sense of wonder. Thank you for this - I'm out sick today and your poem brightened the day just a bit.
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Pax,
Thank you so much! And I'm so happy that the poem could help a bit! Hope you feel better soon, and that you come across more wonderful and whimsical poems to brighten your day!
Thank you so much! And I'm so happy that the poem could help a bit! Hope you feel better soon, and that you come across more wonderful and whimsical poems to brighten your day!
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