The spear of conquest
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Love a spear poem Anon and the line about "a hole where a spear should be" does indeed conjure up an image of a permanently silenced speaker First you get the point, and then you get shafted. Admire the way you wrapped up your philosophy with the closing. Cheers! - Dan
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Re: The spear of conquest
hello,
and welcome. I agree with what Dan said. these were my favorite lines:
Oppress, repress, suppress.
Trap It in a body, a body so weak.
If strong: do not allow It to speak.
this stirs up strong emotion within me!
always, Cat
and welcome. I agree with what Dan said. these were my favorite lines:
Oppress, repress, suppress.
Trap It in a body, a body so weak.
If strong: do not allow It to speak.
this stirs up strong emotion within me!
always, Cat
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Re: The spear of conquest
we do so much damage. And yet we are so weak physically. Great poem highlighting the importance of perspective.
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