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haymanali
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by haymanali » April 21st, 2012, 12:05 pm
Two drops of water
are your eyes divine blue
falling from heaven
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ladymaybebaby
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by ladymaybebaby » April 21st, 2012, 8:30 pm
Love this! I have blue eyes, so maybe I am thinking with my eyes as to how beautiful it is... Honestly though, such a fresh and unique way to capture the blue eyes without the usual cliches! Much enjoyed! -LMB xoxo
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godsplat
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by godsplat » April 22nd, 2012, 4:56 am
Lovely work!
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albatoss
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by albatoss » April 22nd, 2012, 11:12 am
Excellently written.
When there is nothing left to burn, you have to set yourself on fire. -Stars
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Mazrocon
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by Mazrocon » April 23rd, 2012, 2:23 am
Though it can be interpreted different ways the way I read it as the rain is falling from the clouds, God pouring down his love and tears on us.
I can picture it as "literal" eyes as well...
Beautiful image!
~TIMOTHY~
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Banderilla
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by Banderilla » April 23rd, 2012, 5:37 am
Bewildering beauty in these lines...left me amused....excellent read :-)
© 2010-12 Anmol singh Dhaliwal.
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CarolynKleefeld
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by CarolynKleefeld » October 17th, 2018, 10:36 pm
Most beautifully expressed; delightful use of succinct language and much enjoyed.
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DreamerSeeker
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by DreamerSeeker » October 20th, 2018, 9:22 pm
Beautiful write. I love it. Keep up the great work!
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entwife
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by entwife » November 21st, 2018, 11:55 am
very nice work, a miriad of meanings
"I'd rather learn from one bird how to sing than to teach ten thousand stars how not to dance" e.e. cummings
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DreamerSeeker
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by DreamerSeeker » December 1st, 2018, 5:48 pm
I really love this. Very nice imagery and imagination. Well done! :)
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S(OU)LAR
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by S(OU)LAR » December 3rd, 2018, 1:45 am
Much enjoyed. Made me wanna look at the clear blue sky. Thanks for sharing.
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devious83
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by devious83 » December 30th, 2018, 11:19 pm
thanks, this makes me feel special with my blue eyes, a wonderful compliment to poetry you have given us
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rupertpupkin
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by rupertpupkin » May 27th, 2020, 10:37 pm
Simple yet full of wonderful imagery. A delightful piece that truly deserves this spotlight award. Nice write!
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by Chelle » May 28th, 2020, 7:41 pm
good use of form. I myself have blue eyes and would have loved someone to give me such a compliment. :)
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