The divine blue

[haymanali]

Two drops of water
are your eyes divine blue
falling from heaven

[ladymaybebaby]

Love this! I have blue eyes, so maybe I am thinking with my eyes as to how beautiful it is... Honestly though, such a fresh and unique way to capture the blue eyes without the usual cliches! Much enjoyed! -LMB xoxo

[godsplat]

Lovely work!

[albatoss]

Excellently written.

[Mazrocon]

Though it can be interpreted different ways the way I read it as the rain is falling from the clouds, God pouring down his love and tears on us.

I can picture it as "literal" eyes as well...

Beautiful image!

~TIMOTHY~

[Banderilla]

Bewildering beauty in these lines...left me amused....excellent read :-)

[CarolynKleefeld]

Most beautifully expressed; delightful use of succinct language and much enjoyed.

[DreamerSeeker]

Beautiful write. I love it. Keep up the great work!

[entwife]

very nice work, a miriad of meanings

[DreamerSeeker]

I really love this. Very nice imagery and imagination. Well done! :)

[S(OU)LAR]

Much enjoyed. Made me wanna look at the clear blue sky. Thanks for sharing.

[devious83]

thanks, this makes me feel special with my blue eyes, a wonderful compliment to poetry you have given us

[rupertpupkin]

Simple yet full of wonderful imagery. A delightful piece that truly deserves this spotlight award. Nice write!

[Chelle]

good use of form. I myself have blue eyes and would have loved someone to give me such a compliment. :)